Here is the revised conversation with the improved sentences and the reasons for each change:
Original Sentence | Improved Sentence | Reason |
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Good morning! Good noon here. | Good morning! It's noon here already. | The original sentence is grammatically incorrect. The improved sentence uses the correct phrase "It's noon here already" to indicate the current time. |
Today, I was so busy as well like yesterday or two days ago. | I've been quite busy today, just like yesterday or the day before. | The original sentence has a few grammatical issues. The improved sentence uses more natural phrasing and correct verb tense. |
So you have to support your members. | So I need to support my members. | The original sentence is phrased in the second person, which sounds a bit awkward. The improved sentence uses the first person to make it more natural. |
Are you dedicated tutor to rare job or do you have any job other job? | Are you a dedicated tutor for a rare job, or do you have any other |